You hurt me,
Tried to extinguish me
And almost broke me.
Today, finally you are dead
And I feel that I have won
A brutal fight
Through natural order.
I refuse to be anything
Except free from you
And what you have done.
I will live my life
And breathe from this new dawn.
That told him! Very powerful, punchy write! Good one!
Natural order resolves many troubles. All, ultimately. A very fine and potent write.
A very powerful poem, sometimes the bad have to die so the good can live. A really good write.
A positive attitude very well expressed - we should never be subdued by those who have treated us badly. Good one Ruby.
A poem with positive attitudes have been impressively delineated. We shouldn't be underbrought by them who have treated us rudely. here I want to quote..... You hurt me, Scared me, Bruised me, /....And I feel that I have won A brutal fight Nice presentation.10
A tortured path endured, subdued and vanquished!
The titles my favourite part. Theres nothing wrong with the poem saying that
Your work is totally free of conceit, that gives it true quality.
This poem is incredible! The title itself was capturing and the message, truly powerful. Loved it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I refuse to be anything Except free from you It's hard to find the strength to be free, but it's possible. Thanks for highlighting that so well.