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Amazing Disgrace

Rating: 4.9
You hurt me,
Scared me,
Bruised me,
Tried to extinguish me
And almost broke me.
Today, finally you are dead
And I feel that I have won
A brutal fight
Through natural order.
I refuse to be anything
Except free from you
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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2018
A poem with positive attitudes have been impressively delineated. We shouldn't be underbrought by them who have treated us rudely. here I want to quote..... You hurt me, Scared me, Bruised me, /....And I feel that I have won A brutal fight Nice presentation.10
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Terry O'leary 29 September 2015
A tortured path endured, subdued and vanquished!
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Sandy Player 02 January 2013
The titles my favourite part. Theres nothing wrong with the poem saying that
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Owain Glyn 29 December 2012
Your work is totally free of conceit, that gives it true quality.
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Amanda Laurent 11 December 2012
This poem is incredible! The title itself was capturing and the message, truly powerful. Loved it!
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Alla Simone 03 December 2012
I refuse to be anything Except free from you It's hard to find the strength to be free, but it's possible. Thanks for highlighting that so well.
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Stevie Taite 24 November 2012
That told him! Very powerful, punchy write! Good one!
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Maggie Munro 22 November 2012
Natural order resolves many troubles. All, ultimately. A very fine and potent write.
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Dave Walker 21 November 2012
A very powerful poem, sometimes the bad have to die so the good can live. A really good write.
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Valerie Dohren 21 November 2012
A positive attitude very well expressed - we should never be subdued by those who have treated us badly. Good one Ruby.
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