Ruby Honeytip

Rookie - 357 Points (1970)

Cheap Thrill - Poem by Ruby Honeytip

My feet are pointing high in the air,
I'm blinded by a veil of hair.
My body is shaking, a teardropp appears...
Is it too late to let me out of here!
I sneak a peek at you find this amusing?
My skirt 'round my ears, my neighbours assuming....
That my moaning and screaming is born from fun,
Not knowing my instincts are telling me 'RUN! '
But wait..there's a thrill.....I feel so alive
My body is speeding as though to survive!
Laughter has replaced the feeling of dread.
Smiles have pushed my ears high on my head: -D
By the time I realise, I like it more than I'm s'pose ta
It's time to vacate from my first rollercoaster.

LET'S GO AGAIN! ! ! : -)

© 2012

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Stevie Taite gave me the line about a smile so big it pushes your ears up: -D
Go and check her awesome poetry out......I just did.......again: -)

Comments about Cheap Thrill by Ruby Honeytip

  • (1/10/2016 11:57:00 AM)

    Those cheap thrills will always leave you at the bottom of the hill. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/15/2012 6:47:00 AM)

    You're braver than I am, really well constructed! (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (12/14/2012 7:41:00 PM)

    I love rollercoasters but I think I'm too old for them now. Have you been on 'Tower of Terror' at Dreamworld, Gold Coast- that's my favorite! Teriffic poem! (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2012 11:00:00 AM)

    Rollercoasters are on of the top five things in life. Nice Write (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (12/9/2012 7:47:00 PM)

    Great thrill. So beautiful is your style! I'm sure, I'll come here again. (Report) Reply

  • Dee Corpolongo (12/9/2012 9:04:00 AM)

    Loved this surprising poem! and I love rollercoasters as well!

    Great poem here....and such a great thrill! as we approach the next steep hill! :)
    (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (12/8/2012 5:52:00 AM)

    How brilliant, I am now leaving here with a smile, thank you so much. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (12/4/2012 11:30:00 AM)

    Just great Ruby - never been on a roller coaster, not my thing, but I can imagine the thrill. (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2012 10:45:00 AM)

    Being a dirty old man I assumed a different scenario. You got me, but I enjoyed
    it, anyhow. I really wanted it to be like my original assumption.A real fun write
    (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (12/3/2012 6:29:00 AM)

    Excellent Ruby... I think everything you do is a thrill. what a fabulous personality you have. (Report) Reply

  • Maggie Munro (12/3/2012 2:25:00 AM)

    Thanks Ruby, enjoyed the ride you took me for 8] (Report) Reply

  • Ruby Honeytip (12/2/2012 8:23:00 PM)

    Hahaha.....nothing unhappy about rollercoasters.....except maybe faulty harnesses: -) (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2012 7:03:00 PM)

    Okay, you had me fooled. Unhappy ending but couldn't help but laugh. (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite (12/2/2012 2:45:00 PM)

    So much fun! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Hahahahaha weeeeeeeeeee (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (12/2/2012 1:41:00 PM)

    I was thinking the wrong theme here, so funny, enjoyable with a twist at the end! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rachel Branscombe (12/2/2012 5:35:00 AM)

    For some reason this made me laugh. I don't know why (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 2, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 2, 2012

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