A Proscribed Poster Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

A Proscribed Poster

Rating: 5.0


Dreams
Insecticides sprayed
On stinking water in our streets.
Eyes of coming generations
Empty tins in our kitchens
Of dough, ghee and kerosene.
Dancer
Starvation dancing
In our courtyards.
Thirst
Our historical legacy.
Words
Prisoners of curricula
For you who read scripts.
We all
Prisoners of unseen dreams
For you who look for interpretations.

(1977, Translated by Dr. Satyapal Anand)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duh Huh 17 April 2009

Thought provoking and wise with a sadly real depiction of the current state of affairs with our world. Thank you for sharing.

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Subham Dutta 17 April 2009

Hi, This Poem is really good. I like it and keep writing.

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Keysha Sanchez 17 April 2009

I really like this poem for some odd reason i kinda understand what ur saying or at least i think i do lol. ;)

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Karl White 17 April 2009

i liked this one i understood what u wrote ur a good poet

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Dagmara Anna 17 April 2009

I like it also. You make translation good. I understand :) Greetings :) Dagmara Anna

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an excellent poem with deep meaningful thoughts........

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 26 April 2009

Powerful dark imagery.. I clearly see the draped figure with the sickle.Thankfully life is filled with light for those who want to see! E

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Noel Horlanda 25 April 2009

I don't quite get it, have to read each line very carefully and with understanding. I read it many more times but only few lines I understood. I don't blame you, I realized that every poem has its own interpretation and views. Just keep on writing, mate.

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Sandra Fowler 19 April 2009

Articulate, striking imagery. A powerful comment on the difficult times in which we live. But in the landscapes of the mind, dreams are not homeless and hope is still alive. Praise for your gifted pen, Naseer. As always, Sandra

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Shaunne Nichole Gwindale 18 April 2009

This is really good! How did you come up with that it's really creative.

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