A Queen Behind Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

A Queen Behind



From dawn to dusk, pursuing hot
my righteous crooked ways
divine bewitching in her smile
urging to go outright,
trespassing on my likes, dislikes
in deeds my wrong and right,
in shadows mine in sleep and dreams
throwing alluring baits,
Queen real of an unreal world-
she oars my swaying sail
on waters, deep or shallow, mine
illusive she- on trail

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Wednesday, October 1, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: illusion,real life,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 11 July 2009

I love the words in this one, it strikes me as quite a magic touch here.

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Fathmath Sana 17 May 2009

fully described about a Queen. nice words. i smiled when i read 'divine bewitching is her smile' and 'Queen real of unreal world '...... you have a great imagination Kesav. its wonderful... :)

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 11 April 2009

aha...metaphorically loaded... :)

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Vaibhav Pandey 07 April 2009

a gem of a poem.....truly magical....the queen of dreams....10+

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Sandra Martyres 29 March 2009

'Divine bewitching is her smile'....great choice of words...The Queen behind is a very charming poem -

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 24 February 2011

beauty and poetry abound and profound, provides a very nice read. great

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 June 2010

‘On waters deep or shallow mine /Illusive she on trail...noetic oscillations…swings…to and fro… rich concept…Sir… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 hf

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 January 2010

of course, this one is poetic

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Nalini Hebbar 21 September 2009

very poetic and full of wonderful images...regards

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Righteous crooked ways, Divine bewitching is her smile Rachel Ann Butler

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