After rain falls, the Earth sighs,
stretches, cups both hands,
accepts, thoughts of change.
Knowledge showered gives a
start to Earths refreshment,
shows way to path of truth.
Warm sun helps feed the growth,
nourishes new thoughts for life,
helps to build new attitudes.
Scene changes, new point of view,
life changes, no stormy clouds
to spoil, no guilty feelings.
Earth bathes in truth’s elixir,
soaks in new outlook, and
becomes happy with his world.
01-12-2009
this poetic shower provides a refreshing outlook on life...well meaning words beautifully presented...10
dear bob.....a very invigourating poem! we draw all our energy from the five elements.we are made out of them, and go back to them.the poem refreshes all creations looking up for the rain..as usual a lovely poem.best wishes. ritty
Sounding a bugle of Change. Superbly penned. Refreshing shower on the parched land Once again the earth in new apparel stands. CP
Great use of metaphor.The first stanza is especially evocative.10, for you. Warm wishes, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
words expressed are poetic!