A Scent Of Gray Poem by Sandra Fowler

you paint a picture with your words. loved this poem

Oh my, this has so much depth that at first read I can't take it all in. Sandra, it's right what David says, each line carries such weight. The last part really sings out the pain on your separation. This truly resonates. HG: -) xx

Sandra I love your writing! ! ! I agree that content is extremely important to a poem, yet often I look more at style (maybe its the musician in me) ..the reason i loved this one so much is that each line was a new sentence, almost like a chant..sentences often ended in words with 'f' too, i don't know of that was concious or uncious, but it gave it repeating characteristics that played into the chant...your really an excellent writer, not that you need me to tell you that, just thought you should know 10/10

Sandra-your poem is very beautiful. I had vivid imagery in my mind as I read it. I feel as you do, and enjoy communicating with people from other parts of the world. I find that we all more or less think in the same basic way. Wonderful poem. kate

Sheer beauty exists in this heartfelt poem Sandra, I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Melvina

'It rains in my world, Friend, the same as yours. How wonderfully put - a Scent of Gray giving off a feeling of softness - a wrapping for love

A wonderful picture you paint with your words Sandra, great imagery. Best wishes, Andrew

Greate fantasy, well penned friendship in the background of cool landscape and rain, its really coming from the heart, thanks for sharing the tribute,10++

A wonderful letter of friendship, bringing the landscape of your home to the recipient in such warm descriptive terms. I loved the first line which opened into a rare and heartfelt exchange of personal care. Thank you.

wonderfull imagery with fine words. its profound and compact composed.......10++