A Sea With Storms Poem by Nosheen Irfan

A Sea With Storms

Rating: 5.0


You are...
A sea with storms
But like the fish
I must swim in you
To breathe
To live

A Sea With Storms
Sunday, August 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Picture credit to owner.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 09 August 2020

Wow....I wonder how every other lover thinks the same way, What if, someone consider them as waves upon waves (this is my loud thinking) Your poem is awesome....loved it but keep swimming against all waves and keep writing such heartwarming poems.10++++

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Kostas Lagos 09 August 2020

Oh! Really clever writing! Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 August 2022

Fantastic, I appreciate the great depth in your poetic expression. Top score.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2020

This brilliant poem goes to MyPoemsList. A 10 full score

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2020

Most beautiful metaphored poem aboit our emotions. Please dear poetess keepcreating such adorning poems about " the sea" . You are such a master in describing that in brevity. The picture reminds me of the many many Hokusai's pen-drawings. Excellent choice, dear poetess.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 August 2020

A brilliant poem on love based on metaphor is well executed. I appreciate the way of your presentation. Full vote.

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Aarzoo Mehek 18 August 2020

Aaahhhhh after ages girl one more heart warming poem from your pen. Keep swimming until you surpass the storm.10++

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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