A Search For Death Poem by hamid kareem

A Search For Death

Rating: 4.2


off they went three foolish greedy men
in search of death to kill him before they die they mean
onward they went with neither food nor spleen
but for a bottle that soon dried up of wine
everywhere they went they asked of him
but all they heard as they searched in vain
was his name on everyones lip and mane

on the way an old sage they met
whom to a cave yonder directed this set
undearneath the cave, gold coins they met
oh! what a booty all three said and meant
no more looking for death
as momentarily they forget their quest
among themselves off they sent
one to find food for them at least

oh! how deep mens mind are led
for behind his back two in greed
decided to kill the other and share the gold
the other on his way, also in greed
decided to kill the two to have the gold

oh! foolish greedy men
in the end found death but not when they expected
for the other, the two killed
and ate the poisoned food he brought
oh! what a fate befell em all
as all three trussed up and very dead
found death when least expected

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008

Fabulous nice piece, love it.

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Rani Turton 16 April 2008

Very interestingly put. A fable-like poem with a moral: greed never pays.

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Lady Lyn Rosete - Buchan 09 April 2008

I am impressed. Well-chosen words coupled with a profound meaning...such a good write indeed!

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Kesav Easwaran 07 April 2008

beautiful theme... very beautifully presented lines nowhere stiking up... pure flow of good poetic language. good write, hamid

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Clarissa Tobey 03 April 2008

very good well written loved it xoxo loves clarissa

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Nurain Ali-balogun 03 April 2012

I've heard that story before, but not presented in a way so beautiful and touching in a way that the message sinks in. Nicely written.

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Surya . 27 August 2009

a moral lesson told in a beautiful way. indeed death will visit at the appointed time for sure. voted10 surya

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Kefentse Sathekge 03 April 2009

how ironic. very funny too! hahahha i cant stop laughing at their foolish greed and how they found death. a perfect 10 with no objections.

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Kerri King 06 October 2008

this is very good. i like it

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Asif Andalib 06 October 2008

Nice Poem. The school goers should read this piece because it has an important lesson.

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