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A Searching Heart

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I walk along the warm and nestled beach
With the cool water splashing the heels of my feet
I ask myself everyday where are you? Am I yours?
I wait for roaring waves to send me an answer
But nothing comes.
I walk through the colorful garden
Between the daffodils and orchids
With every brush of every petal, I pray
I pray that when I end this peaceful walk, you will be there
But no one appears.

I walk though the crowded streets
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Daniel Partlow 09 February 2007

By the way, this poem is very remenisent of Shulamite's search for King Solomon - I'll post it shortly. DGP

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Daniel Partlow 09 February 2007

Bree, I read all 4 of your poems, and it sounds like you've had your share of hard knocks. But it also sounds like deep down you know there are better more peaceful times ahead. God will help you get there if you let him. DGP

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