* A Seed Within Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

First of all... Its great batting at century. Congratulation. Seed to fruit, a natural way Patience and passion are the crux One who waits will enjoy the yield. Good Theme. Smoothly Strewn. Enjoyed the read.Thank you.

really meaningful poem with various ironies regards Sandhya

For me, this is a nice piece.

I enjoyed reading this poem, and it is about the truth. 10/10

I enjoyed reading this poem, and it is about the truth. 10/10

Commericialisation of Nature's gifts Herbs, fruits, leaves, roots and all Given free to us, how can we sell What is not truly our's but belongs To future humanity - The simple joys Of climbing trees plucking fruits With their juice running down our elbow To chase a squirrel and sing with parrots All now lost and our children drink From bottles and tetrapacks While we gulp down ancient wisdom In haste and hurry, no time to spare, As pills and lageums* with no one To make them with a dash of love Or concern as our grandmas did in ages old. But, to allude to all the above and then Talk of the Spiritual too with such ease In self same breathe I assure No one else other than you can ever do! [*medicine made in Jam like consistency] Angel

You have nicely crafted nice theme. There is no fruit without seed. Wonderful lucid composition with profound thought.10+++

i like the phrase ' life is a journey' it is not the destination that is of great interest its the journey in marriages the moment till the ' Muhurat' is interesting rather than the tying the knot moment which puts a full stop to meeriments great Lakshmanji

gud write...n advice to the impatient generation seekin shortcuts....the journey is as beautiful as the destination: -) 10/10

an insightful look into the 'spiritual life'