* A Simple Song Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

* A Simple Song

Rating: 5.0


a song
as simple as the birds
no pride
not waiting for any appraise
i do want to sing like the bird
i want it to be my language
my talk and my voice
no pride..no appraise

Tuesday, April 14, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,pride
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 21 April 2009

beautiful expression.... lines are interesting thoughts are touching fine-flowing write... so light.....refreshing 10++++

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Ency Bearis 19 April 2009

a plain way to express itself..in a way or another..be simple is good way in a bubble...

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 April 2009

This is a very short piece, which I normally like. But I simply don't understand the point the writer is trying to make. All I could do is guess, and as everyone knows, I never guess. GW62

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Catrina Heart 19 April 2009

simple yet beautiful with elegance.....simplicity is tryly majestic than the opposite...10

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Meggie Gultiano 19 April 2009

simple as it is, this song of yours is beautiful.Love it

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Sonya Florentino 01 May 2009

yes, but if it is beautiful, it will be praised, for who can ignore beauty? :)

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Deepti Agarwal 28 April 2009

what a simple yet powerful to be oneself wish it is... :)

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Akram Saqib 27 April 2009

great wish to sing a song like a bird with any worries.good poem

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Raj Arumugam 27 April 2009

a simple song of profound truth...a unique style, Samanyan...

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Sadiqullah Khan 25 April 2009

The moent it is compelled or even asked it looses its value. Great sensitivity to freedom, I share with you, Lakshminarayan.10

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