A Show Poem by Ari Alsio

A Show

Rating: 3.7


I saw a dream,

that the wind ran my team,

I woke up in the morning,

I collected clothes and I was born in

I jumped in my clothing

trusting for the father thing,

Then I walked on breakfast tea,

then was forced to go to the pee.

I was wondering what to do today,

why does not go to cross my day?

Well, and indeed was raining snow,

I realized that life is just a show!

Sunday, February 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jiten Paul 31 January 2018

A very good poem on life. I realized that life is just a show! Fact-JITEN

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 January 2018

Ari, such an interesting poem.... congrats for being chosen...a perfect 10+++

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 January 2018

Yeah, this is life. It is a mega show with a director of supreme ability. Nice poem. Enjoyed. Congrats.

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James Mclain 31 January 2018

Ari, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Babatunde Aremu 31 January 2018

Life is 'Show' indeed. We need to come this reality that we have parts in the show to positively influence the world. Nice write. Kudos

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i Love it here, while street boys are asleep.. felicitation

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 February 2018

Life is a show is true, beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing.

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Lyn Paul 31 January 2018

Life is most definitely a show. It flows easily for some and so difficult for others. Yes, one crazy show! Thank you

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Rini Shibu 31 January 2018

Life is a big show, we are just tiny part of it.. Congratulations

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Savita Tyagi 31 January 2018

Interesting. Life begins as a show runs like a dream and stays as magic.....congratulations.

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