A Smiling Heart Poem by Rapheal Toyosi

Such an awesome write... congrats for being picked, Rapheal..... a perfect 10+++++

A great start with a nice poem, Rapheal. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

I perused a number of Toyosi's other poems in addition to this one. He has a wonderful rawness and authenticity, an indelible enthusiasm in his verses, that is infectious. I like to pick and pull apart poems to see where their power comes from but these works, warts and all, wash over me with a disarming and all-engulfing personality that washes over me like an ocean wave. Sometimes gentle, sometimes fierce, but mainly with the feeling of connection to something bigger, organic, inseparable from the whole. Technically this poem makes me cringe, and yet somehow I'm forced to overlook all the vague, generic abstractions, the grammatical chaos the persistent capitalizations (which I strangely love) and just nod and smile. Somehow I fell into a kind of Rastafarian reggae beat when reading this and it really seemed to reinforce the message (and subsume many of the flaws as inherent to that context) . My head says I shouldn't like this poem, but I find myself moved by it and ultimately I do like it. The primal authenticity is unmistakable. It least for me.

a joyous poem that pumps out a heart felt rhythmic beat of pure love that is infectious and travel's from head to feet? ...................well meaningful penned Rapheal.

Beautiful poem, lovely ryhmes

A beautiful poem that would melt anybody's heart. The world needs this! ! Don't involve any Hatred to blow

Divine poem.

Very inspiring poem that tells about life as full of wonders and to be enjoyed with God's blessings- - - -Let me quote a few lines- - - Life On Earth Is A Temporary Rain Drop Your Heart Is Endowed With Divine Crop Feel Your Constant Internal Vibration Free To Touch The Infinite Radiation Blessed Is Thee God's Creation Love And Enjoy The World Variation.

Blessed Is Thee God's Creation Love And Enjoy The World Variation..... lovely theme. It is a beautiful poem with nice cllocation. Thanks and congratulatuons for being selected as a poem of the day.

Congratulations for poem of the day.. A smile increase the face value