A Sweet Dream. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Sweet Dream.

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As I slipped from the edge of the moon
towards the earth, fear gripped me tight
Will my dreams accompany or will they leave?

I forgot all these by the spell chant
Of the melodious song soothing me
Till I fell and hit the clouds

Oh, I wondered where my dream gone
As I woke up on my bed with head on pillow
No moon, no sky, no clouds slumber gone.

Saturday, November 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 28 November 2020

As I slipped from the edge of the moon towards the earth, fear gripped me tight Will my dreams accompany or will they leave? Very fine dreamy poem.. in the world of imagination. tony

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Varsha M 28 November 2020

This is stupendously hilarious in the gloomy evening as dusk is nearing. Thank-you sir.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 28 November 2020

For a poet Better to be in space than in bedroom. Nice work

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S H 29 November 2020

Lovely dream. .

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2020

Sometimes sweet dream appears and a parson enjoys his life with full satisfaction. The composition you have made here is so enchanting.Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Darren Jkoeryo 29 November 2020

Wow poem DJ liked it. I wondered where my dream gone As I woke up on my bed with head on pillow No moon, no sky, no clouds slumber gone

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Poetic Sky 28 November 2020

Dream we all live in.

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Anjandev Roy 28 November 2020

No moon, no sky, no clouds slumber gone.......great write....thank u, dear friend....anjandev roy.

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