Weakness Poems: 344 / 500

A Thorn From A Rose

Rating: 5.0

Hugs and kisses,
Our forever:
Love brought us here,
Our endeavour.
I beseech a whole heart,
For kind words.
Though I've found none,
Inspired verbs.
Not even a tiny kindling;
I'm retiring...
To my heart's fairness,
I'm inquiring.
For a fitness to witness;
I'm acquainted.
My weakness is meekness;
Am I defeated?
Do you have a soul with a hole;
Or a part missing?
I can't let beautiful memories go,
I'm not fantasizing...
I'm wrestling;
Until I'm no longer searching,
I'm hurting.
My heart is beating with pain,
It's aching.
I'm asking for love to be kind again,
I'm asking,
For a chance to revive our place,
For a stance,
To stand with love face to face.
For a fact,
For us to take this giant leap of faith,
On knees...
I want to ask for your hand in marriage.
In this part;
I will speak love to your heart.
My forever...
I mean until death do us part.
My endeavor.

A Thorn From A Rose
Thursday, January 7, 2021
Weakness Poems: 344 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A love story, rekindling lost love and overlooking the past, pain and heartache...just all hindrances.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 07 January 2021

I liked your beautiful flowof words down the aisle until you get blessed eith the consent of your better half...this love expression magnificent. Into my favorites.

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Mashiur Rahman 09 January 2021

Great writing, , , +++20

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kyvin nash 10 January 2021

M.R I feel esteemed, thanks a lot! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 January 2021

I can't let beautiful memories go, I'm not fantasizing...wonderful! A magnificent love poem!

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kyvin nash 10 January 2021

Thank you Dr Dillip...you words gives me courage to write more! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2021

Marvellous poem.

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kyvin nash 08 January 2021

Appreciations friend, thanks a lot!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 January 2021

My two thumbs up for you, dear Kyvin.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 January 2021

I like your African proverb as stated below the lovely picture you added. The words you wrote, so mesmerizingly flowing like a river searching his best half, but these belong to the past, so very touching poem.5 Stars! To my fav.

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kyvin nash 08 January 2021

Sylvia I'm truely honoured...its from the heart, I'm glad you love the poem, thanks a lot for the ratings!

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