A Thorn From A Rose Poem by kyvin Nash
A Thorn From A Rose
Hugs and kisses,
Our forever:
Love brought us here,
Our endeavour.
I beseech a whole heart,
For kind words.
Though I've found none,
Inspired verbs.
Not even a tiny kindling;
I'm retiring...
To my heart's fairness,
I'm inquiring.
For a fitness to witness;
I'm acquainted.
My weakness is meekness;
Am I defeated?
Do you have a soul with a hole;
Or a part missing?
I can't let beautiful memories go,
I'm not fantasizing...
I'm wrestling;
Until I'm no longer searching,
I'm hurting.
My heart is beating with pain,
It's aching.
I'm asking for love to be kind again,
I'm asking,
For a chance to revive our place,
For a stance,
To stand with love face to face.
For a fact,
For us to take this giant leap of faith,
On knees...
I want to ask for your hand in marriage.
In this part;
I will speak love to your heart.
My forever...
I mean until death do us part.
My endeavor.
i especially liked 'Do you have soul with a hole; Or a part missing? ' I 'had to' study some parts and consider various definitions and which would apply here. : ) bri
Lol...thank you Bri...it encourages me to hear a feed back after posting, comments make me better because i get to learn and fix mistakes! ! ! You the Best Buddy here because you don't sugarcoat! ! Thanks P.H pal
I liked your beautiful flowof words down the aisle until you get blessed eith the consent of your better half...this love expression magnificent. Into my favorites.
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A soulful depth in these words, relating directly to the feelings within my heart, so good. Let us hope that truly, in the final analysis, love does indeed win after all, against all odds. Superb poetry.
that are thorns; that's fireful eager of love; that is maddened demand of love; just excellent the poem is; nice to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I like your African proverb as stated below the lovely picture you added. The words you wrote, so mesmerizingly flowing like a river searching his best half, but these belong to the past, so very touching poem.5 Stars! To my fav.
Sylvia I'm truely honoured...its from the heart, I'm glad you love the poem, thanks a lot for the ratings!