A Thorn From A Rose Poem by kyvin Nash

A Thorn From A Rose

Rating: ★5.0


Hugs and kisses,
Our forever:
Love brought us here,
Our endeavour.
I beseech a whole heart,
For kind words.
Though I've found none,
Inspired verbs.
Not even a tiny kindling;
I'm retiring...
To my heart's fairness,
I'm inquiring.
For a fitness to witness;
I'm acquainted.
My weakness is meekness;
Am I defeated?
Do you have a soul with a hole;
Or a part missing?
I can't let beautiful memories go,
I'm not fantasizing...
I'm wrestling;
Until I'm no longer searching,
I'm hurting.
My heart is beating with pain,
It's aching.
I'm asking for love to be kind again,
I'm asking,
For a chance to revive our place,
For a stance,
To stand with love face to face.
For a fact,
For us to take this giant leap of faith,
On knees...
I want to ask for your hand in marriage.
In this part;
I will speak love to your heart.
My forever...
I mean until death do us part.
My endeavor.

A Thorn From A Rose
Thursday, January 7, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: hurting,marriage,weakness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A love story, rekindling lost love and overlooking the past, pain and heartache...just all hindrances.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 08 January 2021

I like your African proverb as stated below the lovely picture you added. The words you wrote, so mesmerizingly flowing like a river searching his best half, but these belong to the past, so very touching poem.5 Stars! To my fav.

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kyvin nash 08 January 2021

Sylvia I'm truely honoured...its from the heart, I'm glad you love the poem, thanks a lot for the ratings!

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Varsha M 07 January 2021

I liked your beautiful flowof words down the aisle until you get blessed eith the consent of your better half...this love expression magnificent. Into my favorites.

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kyvin nash 08 January 2021

Thanks a lot Varsha...I'm happy to hear that!

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Smoky Hoss 13 November 2022

A soulful depth in these words, relating directly to the feelings within my heart, so good. Let us hope that truly, in the final analysis, love does indeed win after all, against all odds. Superb poetry.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 13 November 2022

that are thorns; that's fireful eager of love; that is maddened demand of love; just excellent the poem is; nice to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2022

A beautiful poem. Many congratulations dear poet.

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me poet yeps poet 13 October 2022

LOVELY JUST LOVELY HOPE YOU WILL MAKE UP EARLY

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Mashiur Rahman 09 January 2021

Great writing, , , +++20

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kyvin nash 10 January 2021

M.R I feel esteemed, thanks a lot! ! !

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