A Thousand Words A Day Poem by Rommel Filoteo

A Thousand Words A Day

Rating: 4.7

I resolve to write her up
A thousand words a day
And ask her if she'll want me
In some old fashioned way
But my silent fears have gripped me
Long before I reached the post office
Long before my body has stripped me
Though I tried before to tell her
All the feelings I have for her in my heart
Every time that I come near her
I just loose my self as I've done from the start
Coz every single thing she does, simply amazed me
Every little thing she does, just turns magic on me
Even though my life before was tragic
Now I know with her love it always be a magic! ! !

Denise F. 17 September 2007

very nice poem...thank you for sharing

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Alison Cassidy 14 September 2007

This one sounds like the lyrics to a love song. There is a refreshing honesty and generosity in your words. Hope she's worth it. Love, Allie xxxx

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daughter of a seafoam 13 September 2007

wow... touching...I had goosebumps while reading your poem. And feeling how they felt passed on to e the 'magic' you were saying the poem. good job! =)

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Hali Curtis 10 September 2007

Wow so touching and sad... its very good though! It makes me think twice wat others think about people!

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Dee Daffodil 10 September 2007

Wow...You write such lovely poetry...I hope by now, the lady who is the object of your poems, knows of your admiration for her. Hugs, dee

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Pia Andersson 10 November 2007

I would go for the 'a thousand words a day' strategy..A lovely poem from you Wishing you joy Pia

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Micah Bell 04 November 2007

thanks for your comment! ! ! ! ! you seem like a sweet person keep writting....... i love this poem by the way!

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10 points! Great write Rommel! I hope this lady appreciates your love and talent: o) Beautiful, loving and so romantic...Well done!

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Pradnya P 21 October 2007

awesome, true to ur heart the feelings are keep always writing such beautiful poems Pradnya

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 17 September 2007

Hi Rommel - This is a lovely tribute to some lucky lady! Thank you for sharing with me. xxxCheryl

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