A Total Aspect Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Total Aspect

Rating: 5.0


to be present in the present...
is just not a physical aspect
to be present in the present
is just not even a mental aspect
to be present in the present
is neither all an emotional aspect
it is also a spiritual aspect too
to be present in the present
is a total aspect

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 24 February 2009

Great thoughts in this one.....Very interesting to read...good job Sam

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 February 2009

Deep, thought provoking philosophy! I have to cogitate more on this one...............>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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Catrina Heart 24 February 2009

A poem written with some depth...one's personality must be totally whole and healthy in all aspects to became worthy and live a meaningful life.......10

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C. P. Sharma 24 February 2009

Profound thought. To be present in the present is to array surroundings, mind and soul in One line. CP

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Jack Prost 24 February 2009

Mind, body and spirit are separated only by our need to use language to describe them. True presence includes all that is human. A perfect description of one in being.

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Fiona Davidson 08 March 2009

Deep words and an excellent read......thank you.........10+

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 March 2009

I am deeply moved by this piece. shan

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 March 2009

Very simple and well written. Nice poem

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 March 2009

It is true that the total aspect is taken into account to be present in the present. In a few words, you have brought out this total aspect.

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Fay Slimm 27 February 2009

Good concise summary of what it means to be really present - I like this one and a 10 from Fay

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