A Touch Of Verse Poem by Sandra Fowler
A Touch Of Verse
Light has exposed the landscape to its form.
Mood is rebuked of all its artifice.
Wind moves like winter through the naked trees.
I ask you for a leaf, but there is none.
Instead, you offer me a weather coat,
Gray as warm words reduced to whispering.
You tell me that November loves old bones.
Your frost accent is quite believable.
You paint a picture of our private sky.
The light falls faint upon my closing eyes.
Held close within a margin of rare words,
Stillness sings like a fragile, yellow bird.
Against the glass old memories ebb and flow.
A touch of verse becomes a touch of snow.
Our tiny world is slipping into space.
Only your precious hands hold it in place.
Copyright,2007, Sandra Fowler
nicely done... but ma'am you might want to see my works as well Agape and My Forbidden Sea please honest criticism.. thanks!
a beautiful and colorful piece of poetry, thank you for reading a lonely leaf and for your comment
ma'am the way of your writting is so smooth and soul filling that i am unable to explain...you have crafted a very beautiful art, what should i say about this poem cause whole poem is amazingly beautiful, which line should i choose which i should'nt, im lost in the lines of this poem and the painting you've painted in between the verses is like a white canvas put infront of you and you can see that desired art which is sacred and can be seen by yourself...bravo for this art is so small word and i dont have anyother word instead i salute you with a bow for painting another master piece.....thanks 10++++++ and A++++++ add'd to my favs... rgds asif
i can feel the calmness inside of me reading this..a pure joy and peace of mine. Thank you so much for this wonderful treat in spite of a bad weather we have here today. Take care always.I love you, my friend Love and hugs, Meggie
Υπέροχη! ! Βέβαιη πηγη εμπνευσης και για μένα! ! ! Βάζω 10+
i don't know how I missed this one the first time around but I shouldn't wonder... as you so wonderfully put it 'a touch of verse becomes a touch of snow'... everything is ethereal....'.the light falls faint upon my closing eyes'...always beautiful Sandra
Some say that our Universe is expanding and so is space! But Sandra's lines keeps me rooted with loving grace! May the Gods bless you so that you can write for long, - For my heart would love to sing those lines as songs! 10 + - Raj Nandy.
Very dep and touching poem, the words flow like water carrying immense meaning. the landscape is depicted in fine autumn colors with a hope in the end, , it was a fine read indeed a 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 2:57:10 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful verse with calm and gentle touch of words....Elegantly written!