A Tree On The Other Side Of The Road Poem by Mohammed AlBalushi

A Tree On The Other Side Of The Road

Rating: 4.2


A tree on the other side of the road
Big and branched
Green shining leafs
Shade stretch every where
Bird build happy nest
Summer sun raise burn it all
Autumn fail it to end
All left… its alone
Winter came fast
Burgeon start soon
Return life
Every one back
A tree on the other side of the road

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Kumar 02 March 2009

yes the tree is still there, alone excet it`s soul and feelings, ans it knews the canges of the surroundings and the feel its change sharing with unknown several friends, the tiny creaters like ant and birds and little paracites ans the wind ete, but we cant understand too much, thanks for showing the beautiful peaceful sacred tree, gave all good things to all, thanks a lot,10++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 March 2009

This tree is what we all need; and, it is about life.Thanks for sharing it with us. Bye. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Eyan Desir 09 March 2009

I like the flow and it was so simple good write

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2009

A natural landmark that witnessed many history, thats the tree!

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Deependra Kumar Jha 02 March 2009

A good write here. the tree witnesses everything that's happening around...always willing to 'give' whatever it has and never asking anything in return...Thanks for sharing

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 30 July 2013

good imagery with deep meaning really enjoyed thanks for sharing

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Danny Draper 29 February 2012

A nice figurative piece, thanks for sharing. You are a poet and as with all of us it is a journey of learning and developing our skills. Keep going.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 February 2010

nice figurative.... loved it!

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Indira Renganathan 13 September 2009

Seasoned seasonal poem...lovely

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Patrick A. Martin 07 September 2009

As you know I love nature and the way you have related the seasons through your tree is supurb congratulatios 10

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