A Trickle Of Thought- 12 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thought- 12

Rating: 4.7


To liberate ourselves
From being slaves
Of our dark
And wicked thoughts
Is like flying
To heavens above.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Thursday, September 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 September 2020

A well penned poem. Beautifully conveyed and simply impressive..5 stars+++

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 25 September 2020

Short and sweet yet, so poetic and real.

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Shaun Cronick 25 September 2020

Well said and beautifully put Rose Marie. We all have our demons to conquer all part of the human make up id. To ignore their whispering demands of sweet nothings and chose the right path and adhere to it. A thought provoker of a poem and more than worthy of five stars. Many thanks Rose Marie and many thanks again for sharing your good message. Take care.

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Valsa George 26 September 2020

When our mind is rid of wicked thoughts and when it gets filled with love, we enjoy peace and happiness divine! It is a state akin to the one in heaven! Heaven becomes something of our own make! Lofty thoughts Rose Marie!

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Shaun Cronick 26 September 2020

Worthy of another read and while visiting another deserved five stars. Thanks again Rose Marie and remain poetry blessed and forever enriched.

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Rob Lamberton 01 March 2023

May we fly ever so quickly!

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2020

Inspiring poem, though difficult but not impossible.10***

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Akhtar Jawad 04 October 2020

Yes, we can't completely get of dark thoughts, after all we are human beings.

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Shaun Cronick 03 October 2020

Just simply revisiting a poem that is a class act and so worthy of a reread. Thank you Rose Marie and another worthy five stars. Take care and I wish you well.

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Anjandev Roy 29 September 2020

Another great write......thanks for sharing.....anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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