She is so silent
Like the icy water
On the rocky river
Yet inside
It flows patiently
And silently
Waiting the gentle touch
And warmth of the sun.
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As always, Rose Marie has been able to capture a little ocean in this capsule. Beauty augmented by the exquisite metaphor. Enjoyed reading, envious of the brevity you have achieved in expressing the theme.5 *s
the pen of Rose Marie gives us such lovely images to capture our imagination as we consider her embedded meanings ---5 gazing-in-wonder stars and a happy favconsider
A touching poem with a brilliant metaphor. RMJ you have thrust into a nut shell a vast ocean. To my poem list
A vision beyond and marvellous thoughts encapsulated through this brilliant poem.
Awesome, In the state of being self. Articulate poetry. Full Stars.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
silent like the icy water on the rocky river is a great simile and a brilliant thought Madam Rose.