A Trickle Of Thoughts -47 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts -47

Rating: 5.0


She is so silent
Like the icy water
On the rocky river
Yet inside
It flows patiently
And silently
Waiting the gentle touch
And warmth of the sun.


Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 17 April 2022

silent like the icy water on the rocky river is a great simile and a brilliant thought Madam Rose.

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As always, Rose Marie has been able to capture a little ocean in this capsule. Beauty augmented by the exquisite metaphor. Enjoyed reading, envious of the brevity you have achieved in expressing the theme.5 *s

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Susan Williams 17 April 2022

the pen of Rose Marie gives us such lovely images to capture our imagination as we consider her embedded meanings ---5 gazing-in-wonder stars and a happy favconsider

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Jayne Davies 17 April 2022

Lovely write x Well done!

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David Wood 16 April 2022

This poem flows with such gentle beauty, it's just lovely.

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Rob Lamberton 04 May 2025

I love cold mountain streams! Great imagery and insight!

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A touching poem with a brilliant metaphor. RMJ you have thrust into a nut shell a vast ocean. To my poem list

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 April 2022

Loved it, dearest Rose.........10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 April 2022

A vision beyond and marvellous thoughts encapsulated through this brilliant poem.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 17 April 2022

Awesome, In the state of being self. Articulate poetry. Full Stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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