A Trickle Of Thoughts -56 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts -56

Rating: 5.0

I want to paint my life,
with all the colors of the rainbow.
But my life's canvas depends,
on the changing patterns
of the tides.


Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Friday, March 1, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow,rights,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 March 2024

I want that too Bravo! ! ! !

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Denis Mair 01 March 2024

A purling, babbling brook makes sounds fit to accompany birdsong. A raging, brawling gully is fed by eroding rains.

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Anjandev Roy 01 March 2024

Simply magnificent piece..... thank u, rose Marie.....

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Sandra Feldman 05 April 2024

Only the pure of heart and vision can ever write marvels like this unforgettable poem that so will remain with us.

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Rob Lamberton 04 April 2024

The gravity of this poem outshines the rainbow!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 March 2024

Top score for this marvellous poem of painting. And to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 March 2024

How beautiful! To paint life with rainbow colours! Wish we could and hope we succeed.

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M. Asim Nehal 02 March 2024

Too good. It's already written with a golden pen on a starry nights. Full*******

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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