my last of my fingernails
broke off
That was the least of my worries
simplicity. showing the trivials and trivials.. fine. indirectly leading us to sense. thanku. tony
Disappointment expressesd in a surprising way and easy way. thanku. tony
Eat more Jello! That's very good for strengthening your fingernails. A great poem. Makes people wonder what your other worries were.
Worries about life! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
at first i thought this was categorized as a haiku and i was about to investigate if it followed the 'haiku rules'. Thank goodness i see no mention of haiku in the title or 'topics' or text. Now i can, with every fiber of my consciousness, send this cutie to MyPoemList. to MyPoemList indeed. bri :)
my last of my fingernails broke off That was the least of my worries... ....very sweet
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Short, rich and with ambiguity.