my last of my fingernails
broke off
That was the least of my worries
simplicity. showing the trivials and trivials.. fine. indirectly leading us to sense. thanku. tony
Eat more Jello! That's very good for strengthening your fingernails. A great poem. Makes people wonder what your other worries were.
Worries about life! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
at first i thought this was categorized as a haiku and i was about to investigate if it followed the 'haiku rules'. Thank goodness i see no mention of haiku in the title or 'topics' or text. Now i can, with every fiber of my consciousness, send this cutie to MyPoemList. to MyPoemList indeed. bri :)
my last of my fingernails broke off That was the least of my worries... ....very sweet
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Disappointment expressesd in a surprising way and easy way. thanku. tony