A Waiting Love (Song) Poem by Indira Renganathan

A Waiting Love (Song)

Rating: 4.6


Up and down as I walk along the road
There're trees so many..many many..but
I don't! !as I feel a vast empty space

Up and down as I walk along the road
There're flowers many..many many..but
I don't! ! as I feel a vast empty space

Up and down as I walk along the road
There're birds so many..many many..but
I don't! ! as I feel a vast empty space

Up and down as I walk along the road
There's beauty around..so much beauty..but
I don't! ! as I feel a vast empty space

Oh my sweet love, but I don't see them all
Deserted my heart's waiting to meet you
Come along, make me see a paradise

Come along my love, your sweet heart's waiting
Make me see a paradise, paradise

Thursday, May 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,song
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 24 May 2018

Who is that anonymous lover of yours? A lovely poem dear madam! Liked the way you have composed the piece of work! Stay always happy and blessed dear madam!

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ha ha ha, asking me Dillip? ...I am 73

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In poetry everything is possible dear madam! (Only in poetry!)

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A beautiful poem of love, Indira. Lovely and heartwarming. The repetition of the words give more emphasis to the feelings you feel for your beloved. Very passionate.10 and onto my Poem List.

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Savita Tyagi 29 May 2018

Beautiful poem Indira. Only a heart filled with love can see the paradise all around. A 10++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 June 2018

love is the be all and end all of life - -Ma'am you have not yet my well read- - -MY two poems MOMS SMILES AND MOTHER'S DAY TODAY LIKE THEM YOU WILL- - MANY HAVE TRANSLATED THESE- - YOU MAY ALSO KINDLY IN YOUR LANGUAGE MORE WILL SHARE IT

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Akhtar Jawad 05 June 2018

There is always a space untill it is filled by love, a beautiful porm.

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Thank you for sharing such a beautiful love song. I simply loved it. Feel like returning again and again to read this poem.100+++

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The 'Padams' performed by the south Indian classical dancers always have similar themes. The 'nayika'. awaits her beloved. She talks to her Sakhi or friend and pours forth her unhappiness. She says that nothing in nature can make her happy unless and until her beloved comes to her. For me reading this poem, dear Indira madam, was like actually performing a dance on stage..

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A beautiful, emotional poem that touches your very soul. There are trees, flowers, birds, yet the empty feeling within stays. This poem is exactly like the 'Padams we perform in dance. Lovely poem with a full score.

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