A Whimsical Dream Poem by Valsa George

A Whimsical Dream

Rating: 4.9


Poetry is an excuse to dream.....
When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom
When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree
And heart swims like a swan down river!

As I configure words saying beyond what can't be said
I long to become an Ali Baba with the magic mantra
‘Open Sesame' to unlock hearts lying shut
With my feet on the ground and my head in the stars

Oh! The queer dream of a poet...! Do you see?

A Whimsical Dream
Tuesday, July 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2020

A beautifully crafted and well conveyed write that captures the wonders of Poetry. Heartwarming with great imagery.10+++

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Bharati Nayak 29 July 2020

Poetry is an excuse to dream..... When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree And heart swims like a swan down river! - - - - Yes, so truly said- - -Poetry is an excuse to dream.

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Bharati Nayak 29 July 2020

A wonderful poem Madam Valsa George as always!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2020

Emotion goes off like ripe fruits. Configuring words a poet expresses his thought amazingly with beauty of his natural perception. The dream of a poet wonders us wandering in stars and far galaxy. A poet's dream is rich in both imagery and imagination. An excellent poem is very beautifully penned with interesting sequence....10

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Indira Renganathan 01 August 2020

I do agree with you on poetry as an excuse to dream...but epic poetry all over the world, don't they stand as a proof of history and culture where the poets can dream to present the true facts only....always your style of writing has a magic....kudos Valsa

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 September 2020

Poetry is an excuse to dream..... When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree And heart swims like a swan down river! ..........wonderfully beautiful..... :) , , , , ,10.

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Soran M. H 02 September 2020

Dear poet Valsa, hello and thanks for this wonderful poem, really you have picked up very attractive and powerful topic for you lovely masterpiece of work, these amazing poetic imagery are so beautiful and fresh, always your magical and rhetoric words unlocking hearts lying shut, well done and have a top mark 10++ * congratulations for being 270 on top 500 poets

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Soran M. H 02 September 2020

When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree And heart swims like a swan down river!

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Khairul Ahsan 27 August 2020

'Poetry is an excuse to dream' - couldn't agree more! Poets are dreamers, scientists are doers.

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Anjandev Roy 13 August 2020

.........like a swan down river.......wonderful.....thanks for sharing......anjandev roy.

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