A Wild Flower Poem by Valsa George

A Wild Flower

Rating: 4.7


An unpretentious wild flower
Peeped out of the crannied stone ledge
A peach colored blossom
With bright yellow stamens around her navel

She had an exquisite charm
With a seductive smile
So pretty that she could put to shame
Her garden cousins stationed high

She nodded her head in the breeze
As if to invite the footloose ramblers
Who might chance to pass that way
To feast on her beauty
And taste her fragrance
Ere she falls down dead
Unattended, sans sound
In that wilderness
In another day's time,

.......Unnoticed,
..................Untouched
...............................Unsung!

A Wild Flower
Saturday, December 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: flower
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Thomas Gray's famous line-'Full many a flower is born to blush unseen and waste its sweetness on the desert air'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 10 December 2016

Profound poem with underlying message, things may go unnoticed yet nature and many creatures of Almighty are there on earth to notice, touch and enjoy the fragrance....A perfect 10

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Akhtar Jawad 10 December 2016

Unnoticed, ..................Untouched ...............................Unsung! But the poet noticed, and wrote a touching song................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2016

She had an exquisite charm With a seductive smile She nodded her head in the breeze As if to invite the footloose ramblers Who might chance to pass that way... but it is unlucky she falls down dead.. Unnoticed, ..................Untouched ...............................Unsung! It is a heart touching poem on flower with fascinating presentation. Thank u madam for posting such a lovely poem.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 11 December 2016

So sad! At least, I wish you poet had gone her way. Or, did you? Yes, you did. Otherwise, this poem would not have taken birth. Valsaji, I believe the poet in you is coming out fully alive only now like a butterfly out of its chrysalis, because I loved this. (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2019

She nodded her head in the breeze As if to invite the footloose ramblers Who might chance to pass that way To feast on her beauty And taste her fragrance Ere she falls down dead Unattended, sans sound In that wilderness In another day's time, ....thrilling expression. Brilliant poem. Thanks again. .......Unnoticed,

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Mj Lemon 17 February 2017

Never unnoticed, as that precious wildflower is immortalized in this verse. Such a great and wonderful irony that something called 'wild' can be so reserved and contained. A great poem, Valsa.

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Susan Williams 01 January 2017

Your poetry is much like that little wildflower- -humble, exquisitely beautiful, peeping out at us with that sweet sweet charm......... but unlike that wee flower, you and your poetry will NOT be...... ........Unnoticed, ..................Untouched ...............................Unsung!

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Valsa George 02 January 2017

Your sweet comment has made my day, Susan! Thank you so much!

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Simone Inez Harriman 23 December 2016

How sad when we overlook such beauty that this earth shows us on a daily basis. Love it...10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 17 December 2016

You captured the hidden beauty with great charm.

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