A Wish Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Wish

Rating: 5.0


I don't want this god
who just want's me to
pray for myself

though

I do want a god
who would pull me up to make me
a part of himself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 06 May 2009

A very thought provoking write, God is what we want him to be I think, 10 Lynda xx

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 May 2009

10 for this cute piece.

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Ency Bearis 06 May 2009

a good prayer of comparison..but God is God...

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Louis Rams 04 May 2009

we all become a part of GOD. GR8T

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 04 May 2009

Dear Samayan, Does God wants us to pray for self? Certainly not. There is more charm in praying for others. You will enjoy more in sharing your food with someone who is not properly fed for days on.There is more joy in giving than asking for. You might have observed that the palms of the poor upturn much easily than the riches. To my mind, with a little thought, you can present it much better.--Rajkumar

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Anjali Sinha 17 May 2009

wowwwwwww if only wishes were horses then men would ride good write dear Sam -10 anjali

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 May 2009

You want God's organization to be a voluntary organization, suo moto knowing His subjects' predicaments! ! ! Well, I have to accept.

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Sandra Fowler 11 May 2009

Very thought provoking. Your wish is well expressed. Kind regards, Sandra

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 May 2009

God is there or not beyond human intelligence But God we need for our daily existance................ God will be there when we need But there may be some delay indeed..........well written

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Saadat Tahir 10 May 2009

so rt there sam the search for divinity is age old...as old as human memory and as intense as the search for self provocative and reflective lines... cheers

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