A Wish Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Wish

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I don't want this god
who just want's me to
pray for myself

though

I do want a god
who would pull me up to make me
a part of himself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 03 May 2009

It is a nice to read!

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Naidz Ladia 03 May 2009

offering a prayer to others is not bad...a sort piece but meaningfull..naizz

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Indira Renganathan 03 May 2009

Wish, the Almighty keeps you mentally, physically fit to serve others...nice thought

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Indira Babbellapati 04 May 2009

a wonderfu prayer...hope your prayers are answered!

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C. P. Sharma 04 May 2009

God bless you, Samanayana. CP

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Anjali Sinha 17 May 2009

wowwwwwww if only wishes were horses then men would ride good write dear Sam -10 anjali

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 May 2009

You want God's organization to be a voluntary organization, suo moto knowing His subjects' predicaments! ! ! Well, I have to accept.

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Sandra Fowler 11 May 2009

Very thought provoking. Your wish is well expressed. Kind regards, Sandra

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 May 2009

God is there or not beyond human intelligence But God we need for our daily existance................ God will be there when we need But there may be some delay indeed..........well written

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Saadat Tahir 10 May 2009

so rt there sam the search for divinity is age old...as old as human memory and as intense as the search for self provocative and reflective lines... cheers

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