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A Woman’s Question

Rating: 3.6

BEFORE I trust my fate to thee,
Or place my hand in thine,
Before I let thy future give
Color and form to mine,
Before I peril all for thee, question thy soul to-night for me.

I break all slighter bonds, nor feel
A shadow of regret:
Is there one link within the Past
That holds thy spirit yet?
Or is thy faith as clear and free as that which I can pledge to thee?

Does there within thy dimmest dreams
A possible future shine,
Wherein thy life could henceforth breathe,
Untouch’d, unshar’d by mine?
If so, at any pain or cost, O, tell me before all is lost.

Look deeper still. If thou canst feel,
Within thy inmost soul,
That thou hast kept a portion back,
While I have stak’d the whole;
Let no false pity spare the blow, but in true mercy tell me so.

Is there within thy heart a need
That mine cannot fulfil?
One chord that any other hand
Could better wake or still?
Speak now—lest at some future day my whole life wither and decay.

Lives there within thy nature hid
The demon-spirit Change,
Shedding a passing glory still
On all things new and strange?
It may not be thy fault alone—but shield my heart against thy own.

Couldst thou withdraw thy hand one day
And answer to my claim,
That Fate, and that to-day’s mistake—
Not thou—had been to blame?
Some soothe their conscience thus; but thou wilt surely warn and save me now.

Nay, answer not,—I dare not hear,
The words would come too late;
Yet I would spare thee all remorse,
So, comfort thee, my fate—
Whatever on my heart may fall—remember, I would risk it all!

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 12 November 2015

Women and men should ask themselves these questions to focus their hearts on their vows before they give their vows. Self-truth might spare themself and their mate a life of misery and pain

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D Priyanka Singh 19 September 2017

A beautifully written poem, reflecting the youth of the poet in her words. 10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 September 2017

Such an interesting poem worth reading....

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Superb poem..............A thought provoking and points to ponder on.....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2017

Astutely presented. Beautiful poem on woman.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 September 2017

break all slighter bonds, nor feel A shadow of regret: Is there one link within the Past Beautiful poem. Thanks for the sharing.

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Francie Lynch 19 September 2017

Great bit of philosophical poesy here. A pre-nub sounding nothing but commitment. I think the poet's reticence with romantic language leads me to believe it was a pre-arranged marriage, but she's willing to give it her all. She risks all. What's his risk but a miserable wife is things don't work out.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2017

To-day's mistake! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 19 September 2017

Nay, answer not, —I dare not hear, The words would come too late; Yet I would spare thee all remorse, So, comfort thee, my fate— Whatever on my heart may fall—remember, I would risk it all! nice poem.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 19 September 2017

Is there within thy heart a need That mine cannot fulfil? One chord that any other hand Could better wake or still? Nicely penned. 10

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