A World Of Pretend Poem by Patricia Gale

A World Of Pretend

Rating: 5.0


A moon lit night
Stars as far as the eye could see
Sweet evening coolness
Gentle thoughts of thee

Love from a distance
A pure heart and a tender soul

You were real, love was make believe

A hope to guide along the rocky path, I was to face
You were the place that I could hide and forget all cares
Laughter and delight sang in your voice
Happiness and joy were born in my soul

A world of pretend
Making believe it could be

My fairy tale love from across the sea

Knowing you helped me to believe
If just for a season
You became the reason
I could dream again

Time a distance brought reality

Then one night against a crescent moon
I tied a crimson red ribbon to my dreams

So high above did they fly
Floating to the heavens and beyond
Up, up and away
To the land were fairy tales never end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 30 April 2019

Love from a distance, a pretend love or somehow it may even be your real love.... very well written.10+ I once read a poem: what is the ocean that separates us compared to the sky that binds?

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Fay Slimm 19 November 2009

This is pure romance and you are well able to sustain the depth of romantic moods - - - just so emotive to read Patricia - - ' make believe' can truly teach us reality if we listen and learn...... great read..... Fay 10/10

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Marilyn Lott 19 November 2009

Sweet and lofty... light and fun. I enjoyed the trip through the clouds, a nice way to start my day, Patricia. I gave you a '10! ' several times but for some reason it won't change. Perhaps later! Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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