A World Without God Poem by Rebecca Navarre

A World Without God

Rating: 5.0

Something is broken that can't be
repaired. Something is missing that
can't be spared. Like the earth needs
the sun and the moon. Like the flowers
need rain to bloom. Like without oxygen
we couldn't breathe. Like without nature
and the oceans life would cease to be.
Like without a heart there'd be no love.
And without gravity there'd be no stars
above. Without wings the birds couldn't
fly. And without the Holy Spirit, the soul
withers and dies.

Friday, September 13, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love,oceans
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 13 September 2024

Amazing poem, crystal clear created and this is absolute a true marvelous poem, so enjoyable to read. TOP Marks. Thank you so much for sharing.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 September 2024

Bravo on this worthy poem TFS Rebecca

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Sandra Feldman 13 September 2024

Hallelujah to this Poet great thzt in such a glorius poem has been able to summarized the secret of life, itself. great admiration for this superb work that should become like a prayer if recognition for us all

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Sandra Feldman 13 September 2024

What a Masterpiece of love and faith. Defining so exactly the condition of all that's made and surrounds us. Haleluya t

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Cowboy Ron Williams 29 September 2024

Wonderful poem, Rebecca.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 September 2024

I cite you my dearest Becca, 'And without the Holy Spirit, the soul withers and dies' Absolutely! What a greatest Beauty you have shown here, I am deepest moved, TOP Marks,5 STars and Thank you humbly for sharing. God Blesses You, Amen.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 September 2024

A moving write that makes us think our own faith in God. Great images and so well crafted.! Top Marks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 September 2024

A beautiful poem of faith so wonderfully expressed. Tender words with utmost humility. Liked the analogy in this amazing poem!

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Anjandev Roy 14 September 2024

Pure and sublime piece...... thanks for sharing....

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