TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Able To Face The Storms In The Race

SAME RACE............................


Able to face
the storms in the race,
climb mountains
and back to base
.Hands IN hands,
souls with souls,
eye to eye
and face to face,
.Life is short
Time is fast
we live in haste,
You dig the roads with will and thoughts
you fill the minds with will and voice,
not fool but wise, no one erase
You surf the sea,
you dig and see
and back to place
You dive in souls,
rub hate and fools
with peace replace
.................................The SaMe RaCe

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 22, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, June 23, 2011

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  • Broken Heart (5/22/2010 10:32:00 AM)

    Waooo! Amazig poem :)

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  • Beauty Philosophy (12/21/2009 10:47:00 AM)

    A nice poem with a good flow and a strong determination to go beyond all hardships...

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  • Ian Bowen (11/20/2009 9:44:00 AM)

    ========================================
    ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ********************
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    From: ****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.. (((((((SiLenCe)))))))
    To: Ian Bowen
    Date-Time: 11/18/2009 7: 55: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: scusi mua
    -
    what do you mean by you know it is me..pardon me do you think iam free for all of you..iam a young lady who has other thing to think about..iam not old as you to set here and play non sense...

    Why should my age matter?

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  • * Naphright * (10/28/2009 5:31:00 PM)

    it does feel like we climb mountains and back to base, but i am believing that those mountains are removed and cast into the sea,

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  • Anand Madhukar (10/5/2009 9:07:00 AM)

    A nice piece with a good flow.

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  • Afzal Shauq (10/2/2009 11:37:00 AM)

    marvelous and heartfelt piece of writing..10/10

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (10/2/2009 12:31:00 AM)

    very poetic! .........................

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  • Emu Getachew (10/1/2009 1:21:00 PM)

    This poem is like a dropp of incense on red charcoal all senses are involved. You know what I mean…

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  • Merna Ibrahim (10/1/2009 10:59:00 AM)

    Fantastic poem! ! ....marvelous poem! !
    thanks for sharing your valuable thoughts, , ,10s

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  • Emma AdamyanEmma Adamyan (10/1/2009 9:19:00 AM)

    the poem is written quite and fast like a shot. good work Tamara. life is short, time is fast was right noticed. for that reason we so much need to command our lives without fatal mistakes

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  • F D (9/30/2009 5:10:00 PM)

    amazing poem, excellent one, keep up the good job

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  • Rayan AliRayan Ali (9/28/2009 8:35:00 PM)

    Life is short
    Time is fast
    the best lines of all....great thinking!

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  • Clara Odelia Ciutara (9/28/2009 2:41:00 AM)

    Hi, After reading this, i could catch another answer of 'what does life mean? ' such a great description about life, yes. we should be able to face the greatest storm, either. thanks for sharing>>

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  • Sandra Fowler (9/27/2009 12:09:00 PM)

    Praise for your warm, brave spirit.
    Inspiring write.

    Kind wishes,

    Sandra

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  • Bob Blackwell (9/27/2009 10:30:00 AM)

    Tamara, with peace replace, if only every thought of man could be replaced with a thought of peace. Bob 10++

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  • Sahar Sahar (9/27/2009 7:31:00 AM)

    A melody blended with intellectual description, and to the point......it is greatly penned..........

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  • Allan O (9/27/2009 5:43:00 AM)

    short but to the point. nicely put

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (9/27/2009 2:14:00 AM)

    interesting verses....a meaningful one....

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  • Christina Phan (9/26/2009 10:42:00 PM)

    Wow fanastic job
    great imagation
    10+++
    keep wht u do

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  • Jen Capaldi (9/26/2009 9:59:00 PM)

    Great poem Tamara! well written, imaginative metaphors with thought provoking meaning. some great lines that ring all too true.
    Life is short
    Time is fast
    we live in haste
    What legacy do we leave as time waxes and wains
    Have we remembered in our short lives
    To give reverence to the important things
    Were we selfish or kind
    Our wrongs in life did we try to change
    Did we learn to recognize a persons worth
    Not through how different they are but by how similar we are
    How will the world remember us when we're gone
    Great job! you know you have my vote 10+++
    Jen

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