Able To Face The Storms In The Race Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

Able To Face The Storms In The Race

Rating: 3.1


SAME RACE............................


Able to face
the storms in the race,
climb mountains
and back to base
.Hands IN hands,
souls with souls,
eye to eye
and face to face,
.Life is short
Time is fast
we live in haste,
You dig the roads with will and thoughts
you fill the minds with will and voice,
not fool but wise, no one erase
You surf the sea,
you dig and see
and back to place
You dive in souls,
rub hate and fools
with peace replace
.................................The SaMe RaCe

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 27 September 2009

Tamara, with peace replace, if only every thought of man could be replaced with a thought of peace. Bob 10++

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Sandra Fowler 27 September 2009

Praise for your warm, brave spirit. Inspiring write. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 28 September 2009

Hi, After reading this, i could catch another answer of 'what does life mean? ' such a great description about life, yes. we should be able to face the greatest storm, either. thanks for sharing>>

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Rayan Ali 28 September 2009

Life is short Time is fast the best lines of all....great thinking!

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F D 30 September 2009

amazing poem, excellent one, keep up the good job

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Broken Heart 22 May 2010

Waooo! Amazig poem :)

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Beauty Philosophy 21 December 2009

A nice poem with a good flow and a strong determination to go beyond all hardships...

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Ian Bowen 20 November 2009

======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: ****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.. (((((((SiLenCe))))))) To: Ian Bowen Date-Time: 11/18/2009 7: 55: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: scusi mua - what do you mean by you know it is me..pardon me do you think iam free for all of you..iam a young lady who has other thing to think about..iam not old as you to set here and play non sense... Why should my age matter?

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* Naphright * 28 October 2009

it does feel like we climb mountains and back to base, but i am believing that those mountains are removed and cast into the sea,

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Anand Madhukar 05 October 2009

A nice piece with a good flow.

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