ALONE.
MEMORY.
SIGHS.
WHY?
ALONE.
TEARS.
SHAKES.
WHY?
ALONE.
SHADOWS.
SCREAMS.
WHY?
copyright 2008 POEWHIT
JESUS SAVES
simple and yet so intricate in its meaining! nicely penned
ALONE.... is by itself a punishment. You Have captured the essence of Sorrow the pain and grief in such simple and short verse. A very wonderful poem Sir.
Simple but really effective. Thanks for commenting on mine BTW!
What is happening to me? Crazy thoughts that just won't flee. Into the bathroom - head down. Tears running over the deep frown. not confident of self and no trust in him otherwise this may not happen at all...very good write. i loved it.. read mine individual...cry not....all trains stop here...
Yes, the final question which lingers is Why? Why? all this bloodshed, pain, sacrifice And untimely death, ulitimately - Why? A question which should all think of. The anguish of the soul and The cry of the heart is indeed Touching and sadness fills the mind. Angel
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Jesus does save. Don't ever forget it. Thanks for sharing. -Brie