Aches Of Life Poem by ramesh rai

So true we all wish for a long and happy life! Lovely write!

Beautiful images creating deep impressions in the mind.

Delightfully short but sweet and true.

Meaningful....life is survival. Congratulation for wining the recent contest sir, you deserved it!

I see the irony: both long for a long live, however, only one will survive the encounter; one becomes ethereal, the other remains terrenal. Balance and Chaos

The thought whether we will live long or die prematurely remains an ache with most humans as well as other creatures! A cute little poem!

All creatures love life and death is as horrible for them as for us, nice write

just as us humans we all want a long and eventful life. nice write