poet ramesh rai

ramesh rai

Achievement Of Life

Achievement of life can not be counted
only through coins earned in life
because coins are like wheels
which never stops or
can not be stationary
to - day it is with you
to - morrow may not be.

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 17, 2012
Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 17, 2012

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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/22/2012 5:51:00 AM)

    Though this poem seems to be philosophical, the life does not depend upon the money only...True, but the poor may say differently..I like the way that this poem is written. Nice

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  • Meda Martha (7/21/2012 1:23:00 AM)

    That's really so true.

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  • Captain CurCaptain Cur (7/19/2012 2:59:00 PM)

    Very astute call, plus they tend to flip.
    Nice poem.

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  • Sajna KailasSajna Kailas (7/19/2012 3:50:00 AM)

    yeah, definitely. the coins may not be with us always, but the friends we got in our life will always with us.
    the everlasting and best achievement in our life is Education. It will not perish. we got It from schools, nature, and from others. time also teach us so many things.
    well done. you are right.achievements cannot counted by coins.

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (7/18/2012 1:44:00 AM)

    Very correct. Achievements in life can never be counted with coins
    or wealth earned and accumulated. Coins are no doubt necessary
    to live but it can not be an end goal. Money is only a means to lead a
    meaningful life. awell written.

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  • Allemagne RoßmannAllemagne Roßmann (7/17/2012 12:16:00 PM)

    Coins are external tokens.You cannot carry them.You can only tally them.

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