Acronym For Your Name Poem by Bilal Raja

Acronym For Your Name

Rating: 4.3


Bewildered In Life And Love,
Something’s will never change
My sad and lonely existence
It’s bound to remain the same

Believing In Lie After Lie,
You led me further astray
Our relationship could never grow
When you were always away

Because I’ve Loved And Lost,
By the saying I’m appalled
That, its better to have loved and lost
Then to have never loved at all

Broken Innocence Left A Legacy,
Turning a child into a ghost
Life through my blood shot eyes
Now to that lets all toast

Being Isolated Leaves Anyone Lonely,
Without a lover or a friend
Alone in this dark room
This is where my story ends

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glenn Mark Amor 22 January 2009

emotional poem.. i like it.

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Ron Knight 21 January 2009

Great poem excellent discription keep up the good work

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Sarah Abdullah 21 January 2009

Broken Innocence Left A Legacy, Turning a child into a ghost Life through my blood shot eyes Now to that lets all toast My Favorite part..... Nice Lines....

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Jessica Goudreault 17 January 2009

Aww, that was well written. My favorite part was the 'It's better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all'.

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Brianna Trombley 17 January 2009

i like the way you express yourself, another great write

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Rani Turton 16 February 2009

Very touching, Bilal. A promise of great poetry to come.

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Dolan Doran 14 February 2009

holy crap! ! I love it! ! ! seriously seriously love it! great job.

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Tiera Parker 30 January 2009

that poem was great.. i almost cried.. i know exactly how it feels

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Raindreamer Hippy 23 January 2009

You express yourself well. I feel like so many people could relate to this. Another great poem. =)

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C Richard Miles 22 January 2009

Bilal, I’m Leaving A Letter Or two about your poem: Believe that it’s sure to get better And sorrows will soon be going. A bit trite, perhaps, but experience is talking here. At your age life can seem not worth living sometimes, but at least you’ve got it all before you. A great poem, though – keep on writing. Richard

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