Adam & Eve Poem by merna ibrahim

Adam & Eve

Rating: 4.7


They are the first people created on this universe.
Because of their existence, we found the earth.
They are the origin of our race.
God created them with a body and face.

Eve is the symbol of women,
Adam is the symbol of men.

Eve is the support, warmth and care.
And this's a thing that we are of it aware.
Eve is the beauty and femininity.
She will be our mother for eternity.

Adam is the bravery, safety and strength.
He tries to penetrate any fence.
Adam is the manhood and will.
He is the one who stand still.

For their ambitions, we are here to fulfill not to kill! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philosophy of a DewyFlower 07 November 2009

Adam&Eve/ a beautiful description! this is the begining of Human Life's Creation, in fact it is based on LOVE ALLAH states: 'It is He Who created you from a single person, and made his mate of like nature, in order that he might dwell with her in love' (7: 189) 10+++ Thanks For Sharing/

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 13 October 2009

The essence and start of humanity in this world...well done! ! !

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Obinna Eruchie 08 October 2009

The way you described the qualities of the first man and woman, is adorable. Keep writing.

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Romeo Della Valle 21 September 2009

Dear Merna, obviously, your poems are reaching a high poetic level, keep it up, this one is a well-penned, you got my vote, keep on writing please, I hope you have the time to read my lately posted poem titled: 'A LOVE'S GAME' if you like it, please comment and rate it, I would kindly appreciated, I added you as a friend if you don't mind, Love and Peace, Romeo (you got my vote for this poem,10+)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2009

wonderful ! fine poetic description! loved it! 10+

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May I invite you to read my poem Eve?

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Abdallah Gamal 11 September 2011

Wonderful, fabulous, fantastic. I'm out of words, gr8 work :)

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Eve, the mother of all living. A beautiful genesis(beginning) poem! God Bless; D

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Rania Hammoud 23 January 2010

Rhyming, gd style in narrating and expressing ur ideas POwer is in the last line.. Bravo mirna

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Lina Ehab 27 November 2009

i like it very much it is really written from ur deep heart but i feel that it isn't enough, beside ur other poems it's alittle weak u need more words 2 express it but it's amazin

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