Adobe Feelings 01 Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Adobe Feelings 01



Golden butterflies flying
Winter searching dreamy rose
Cool rainbow feelings

Midnight winter midst
Nocturnal birds crying around
Diary crawl under ribs

Winter smiles at night
Cuckoos consultation meeting
Spring sprouts on time-calyx

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 15 July 2009

''Golden butterflies flying Winter searching dreamy rose Cool rainbow feelings'' Wonderful descriptive poem of nature.Colors are non-verbal communication, by symbolism and generate a physical reaction....10+++ from me

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premji premji 15 July 2009

you travel along with nature......... please read my 'oneryu's from poem no 146

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Brishti Mazumdar 13 July 2009

Scattered ideas, knit well in a small space...conveying the necessary message...wonderful...10++

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Pandian Angelina 12 July 2009

It was as if I stood beside And watched the scene As you painted in words! So beautiful the night That I yearn for it In a dream!

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Rakesh Bedi 12 July 2009

Tenderness of Nature; penned tenderly!

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Maria Barbara Korynt 26 July 2009

This poem is attesting to imagination of the great format - of course, of imagination of the Poet. Excellent painted images word and competently selected of them 'colours' they cause that the poem is becoming magic and it attracts and charm. Very much I like it and certainly it is deserving the highest note. Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Dagmara Anna 26 July 2009

Very interesting written.I like it DA

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 22 July 2009

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hi ASHRAFUL...how are you friend..enjoyed this warm poem..is this the case of us all suddenly we will go...see you again..best wishes..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 July 2009

how stylish the construction is! shan

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