After It Rained Poem by Valsa George

After It Rained

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Soon after the sky had shed her liquid sorrow
when dark clouds quickly vanished
it looked so immaculate, spotlessly blue
When the noise of cosmic hiss subsided
and wind withdrew to an unknown hideout,
there was a hush- the hush that follows
as a priest concludes his spirited sermon

In that quiet when dream and life coalesced
I saw leaves trembling in the cold
dragonflies performing a ballet in the air
their wings catching glints of sunlight
spiders moving round crystal studded webs
repairing the broken filaments of their gossamer
and birds from trees taking off into sky

Enjoying a pervasive sense of peace
and heart soaked in pure mirth
humming the lyrics of a half forgotten song
I walked down through cobbled paths
feeling the wetness beneath my feet
to savor the beauty of Nature
newly bathed in profuse vernal shower


Suddenly the light blazoned
giving a golden glow to leaves
and the suspended rain drops
glittered like sparkling gems

Mesmerized by the beauty of the scene
there wobbled shiny silver droplets of joy
in my heart too, struggling to be spilled out!

After It Rained
Tuesday, August 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 11 September 2017

Serenic beauty very well captured After It Rained..... While suspended raindrops fell on ones heart giving a way to joyful song. Loved it from your pen Valsa.

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Valsa George 12 September 2017

Thank you Geetha! Yes, it was a beautiful experience and and the refreshed face of Mother Earth was a joy to behold!

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Laurie Van Der Hart 10 September 2017

I'm so glad you spilled the shiny silver droplets of joy on us with this poem, Valsa. A very refreshing poem.

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Valsa George 11 September 2017

Thank you so much Laurie! Glad you got delighted by my poem!

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Loke Kok Yee 03 April 2018

I sat down slowly absorbing all the emotions brought forth in this riveting write.Every line touching me as you took me through on this fascinating journey, the details will be stuck with me for some time to come. Thanks Valsa.

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Glen Kappy 04 November 2017

Well I picture this scene, Valsa, and the feeling it brought on for you. Two of my own poems come to mind—Snail Mornings and Semi-retired in Early Spring. The inspiration we find in nature! Do you know Gerard Manley Hopkins’ sonnet God’s Grandeur? Glen

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Stephen Katona 01 November 2017

Thank you for filling my heart with tiny silver droplets of joy with this wonderful poem. You remind us of the beauty of nature under our feet that we might so easily pass by without noticing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 31 October 2017

I am indeed pleased to get this rain at last as the country is coming closer to winter's spell now....Valsa...... I wish I could imagine and write like you........Full credit.... though I am posting belated notes.....Valsa.....Your poems are always shiny irrespective of late visit or early visit to your poem's paradise...

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 September 2017

Dragonflies performing a ballet in the air Keen observation shows many marvels in nature. Beautifully penned.

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Valsa George 17 September 2017

Thank you so much sir! These days it rains profuse! The interval between rains with bright sunshine is so pleasant!

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