After The Shower- Haiku Poem by Seamus O' Brian

After The Shower- Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Down the branch it crawls
Catching sunlight as it falls
Glisten, drop of rain

After The Shower- Haiku
Thursday, September 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,rain drops
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 08 September 2016

I will return and read more of your work, Neal. I find so few truly talented writers here and I enjoy learning from them. Excellent Haiku.

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Seamus O Brian 13 September 2016

Thank you, Mr. Kurt, for your gracious and encouraging words.

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Kathy Van Kurin 24 May 2018

After The Shower Seamus O' Brian, To be aware of gravity and the movement of water, for it is in the force of gravity and movement that the sun does it's beautiful work. Lovely simple poem that I can enjoy. You are an excellent poet. I have yet to write a true haiku such as this. Blessings, Kathy

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Narayana Aghalaya 09 March 2018

Lovely Haiku - seventeen syllables; seventeen gems!

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Seamus O Brian 09 March 2018

Thank you, kind poet! A gracious comment is always a joy to receive. Be blessed, my friend! S

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Rebecca Navarre 03 March 2018

Wow! ! ! ! ! A Breath Taking Haiku! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Painted! ! ! ! ! Awesome Imagery! ! ! ! ! And Beautiful Photo Too! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Seamus O Brian 09 March 2018

Hi, Rebecca! Happy Spring! Thank you for your always gracious encouragement. You always make me smile. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 February 2018

Beautuful poem on nature in concise. Dear Seamus, your perception on rain drops has been nicely portrayed. Thanks for sharing.

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Seamus O Brian 09 March 2018

Thank you, Kumarmani! I am so glad to be able to share a little spring-time nature with you. Be blessed, my friend. S

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Glen Kappy 12 August 2017

neal, i see many have commented positively on this haiku- and deservedly. cool! like many i like, i think, i've seen that- why didn't i write it? thinking of this and your longer poems, it displays your verbal nimbleness. -glen

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