After The Shower- Haiku Poem by Seamus O' Brian

the words present a perfect picture in my mind of the time right after the storm - Rich

After The Shower Seamus O' Brian, To be aware of gravity and the movement of water, for it is in the force of gravity and movement that the sun does it's beautiful work. Lovely simple poem that I can enjoy. You are an excellent poet. I have yet to write a true haiku such as this. Blessings, Kathy

Lovely Haiku - seventeen syllables; seventeen gems!

Wow! ! ! ! ! A Breath Taking Haiku! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Painted! ! ! ! ! Awesome Imagery! ! ! ! ! And Beautiful Photo Too! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

Beautuful poem on nature in concise. Dear Seamus, your perception on rain drops has been nicely portrayed. Thanks for sharing.

neal, i see many have commented positively on this haiku- and deservedly. cool! like many i like, i think, i've seen that- why didn't i write it? thinking of this and your longer poems, it displays your verbal nimbleness. -glen