Against All Odds, a poem
go against everything
is nothing more than just bumping into iron pipes
where you get bloodied wounds,
the other bends
to call soon
hello, stop!
that's the full noose
do it another way
what you get
Lots of fun! , Have fun
that you go against everything
is not correct
not fluff either
That's why against all odds
Please, stop!
Sunday 21 November 2021
A clever poem, my friend. Liked how you deliver this magnificent write. To my Poem List.
To go against everything will create chaos and never right. I agree with the closure line, Please, stop! So rightly said so brilliantly expressed.
An amazing poem with a meaningful message. and insight.
Flying in the face of adversity may get your wings clipped. Make sure you have a parachute! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great piece of work, Sylvia!