Against All Odds Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Against All Odds

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Against All Odds, a poem

go against everything
is nothing more than just bumping into iron pipes

where you get bloodied wounds,
the other bends
to call soon
hello, stop!
that's the full noose
do it another way
what you get
Lots of fun! , Have fun

that you go against everything
is not correct
not fluff either
That's why against all odds
Please, stop!

Sunday 21 November 2021

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Mitea 21 November 2021

Great piece of work, Sylvia!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 November 2021

A clever poem, my friend. Liked how you deliver this magnificent write. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 November 2021

To go against everything will create chaos and never right. I agree with the closure line, Please, stop! So rightly said so brilliantly expressed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 November 2021

An amazing poem with a meaningful message. and insight.

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Kostas Lagos 22 November 2021

Well written poem Sylvia

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David Wood 22 November 2021

Flying in the face of adversity may get your wings clipped. Make sure you have a parachute! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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