Spouse lying comatose,
Shadows under his closed eyes;
Rosary in hand...
Though I can't be too sure, - there could be a brighter side, With help of those beads he could be praying for the salvation of some- bodys soul, - if not his, it could it be mine? ! 10! -Raj Nandy
With Faith In Hope For Peace! Maybe -... Beautiful potrayal Of love of pain Of life and death! Angel Ps - Thanks to Premji I came upon this first.
This poem succeeds in creating the image in front of eyes; and reader is forced to think and re-think. It reminds me of saint kabir - dukh mein sumiran...... (mamta, plz read 'beads of rosary', time permitting.)
Sorry if I said anything wrong, somehow this poem reminds me a scene in FIRE...........Kulbhushan Karbanda does it, while his wife keeps looking at him................................helplessly..........
Imagination at large Only few lines to express Poetry at best...
Haiku is a wonderful form of poetry... just 3 lines n all is said.. just like u did... agony... rightly sees thru it..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
MAMTAJI, usually i don't use capital letters........ but i have already used them for you!