Aim High Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin
Aim High
My aim is high
As high as the moon
And stars above
It is almost
At the tip of my hand
But slips away in an instant.
I never departed
From that aim
Forever it will be mine
For my life without it
Is like breathing
With ailing lungs.
The path towards that aim
Is melted into
The darkness of the night
Turbulent
Yet, I will never lose hope
Until it will be realized.
I shout my aim
From the top of the hills and mountains
To the hidden springs in the mountains
At the mighty seas
Where the roaring rogue waves
Will carry my voice
All the way to the bottom of the sea.
I shout my aim
On the tunnels
My aim echoed
Ten thousand times
Up above the sky
It is well written in the rainbow
In seven striking hues.
I write my aim in papers
And attach them to the claws
Of singing birds
Let them fly
Bring it to the sky.
And I whisper
To the butterflies in
The garden
They will fly
Fly up above
They will bring it
To heaven.
Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
An aimless life is like a radar less navigator! You have beautifully depicted the concept in this excellent poem Rose! ....10
I like all stanzas very much, but one is most striking, I cite that here: I write my aim in papers And attach them to the claws Of singing birds Let them fly Bring it to the sky...........................True mesmerizing read and a very excellent poem, brilliantly told. Well worded and fascinatingly rendered. A Full 10 for this Beauty. Thank you so much for sharing this scintillating poem.
An inspiring poem that speaks of the need of hope positivity and confidence in life. Beautiful write, as always 10+
My aim is high As high as the moon And stars above It is almost At the tip of my hand But slips away in an instant.........this is the first stanza which means a lot. Aim of life should be high. The fruit is not in our hand. We should go on performing righteous deeds having high aims. A beautiful poem nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10
As strong is your aim so high you fly.... it all depends upon how strong we pursue....nice thought crafted into a good poem, , , thank you Rose- -10
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I would like to translate this poem
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3/26/2023 10:37:17 PM # 1.0.0.1112
This is a magnificent poem Rose. Loved all the stanzas. A 10 :)
I feel honored of this great comment, Bipasha. Thank you so much.