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Air, Water, Fire

Rating: 4.9

Standing high on the rocky mountain top
She stands mesmerized by the beauty below
A sea of trees and fields spread out before her
Like the strokes from an ole masters brush
Finely painted with textures and colors of nature
Sweet Smells waft through the air assaulting the senses
Essence of pine meadowland and wildflowers
Raising her arms in the air as a goddess in worship
Turning her face to the sun, rays dare to kiss her cheek
Soft blue dress swirling around her in the breeze

Wind caressing her bronze skin tenderly like a lover
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Tsira Goge 14 April 2009

I am air, water, fire; I am all things for her ............................................................. T, Very beautiful poem.... with graceful metaphors... You have delicately conceded your of favourite the fourth element... 10.. All best, Tsira

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Costa Anakiev 14 April 2009

Well written, a beautiful picture. I have something about these things, but it's funny as usual. When I find it, I'll inform you.

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Sylvia Feeley 13 November 2008

The imagery is excellent. I can see you on the top a mountain shouting, I am Air. Water and Fire.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 October 2008

Very beautiful poem. Air, water and fire are the source of power. Love it,10+

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Marilyn Lott 26 October 2008

You are an artist, TJ, with brush in hand and the wisdom and insight to see what the ordinary person does not. With that brush you take us on an extraordinary journey. I will watch your work with joy! A '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Paul Stertz 25 October 2008

Beautiful and so perfectly descriptive that I felt like I was there. Thank you for sharing this with us!

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Pooja Ladyluck 24 October 2008

immensely b'ful expressions n u got better words to express them......i jus luved it.......thanx a lot! ! !

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David Threadgold 20 October 2008

A masterpiece not only as an artist with the brush but also with the pen. I like this one a lot well done.10/10 Regards Dave T

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Lynda Robson 17 October 2008

A beautifully composed piece about the elements, I will be reading more of your work, well done, 10 Lynda xx

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