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All My Woe

Rating: 4.1
I ask of you something dear.
Something heartfelt and somewhat sincere.
Hold the one you love,
Closer now, and ever so near.
Tell them how you love them so,
How them breathing, makes up for all the woe.
For the one I truly loved,
Does not, even now, even know.
How me breathing without them,
Is the reason of all my woe.
Fabrizio Frosini 07 December 2014
. well written. .Nice lines
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Lawerence Mize 25 May 2014
Very nice poem. So much said in so few lines.
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Savita Tyagi 25 May 2014
Sincere, heartfelt words. Yes hold on to love while you can. Those happy moments are price less. Loved this short poem that says so much with so few words.
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Nurain Ali-balogun 25 May 2013
This is poetry, so much said in so few words. It was as though the words were written for me, for the reason for all my woes is me breathing without the one whose breathing would have made up for my woes.
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Gajanan Mishra 25 May 2013
good poem, hold the one you love. I like it.
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Jayne Davies 25 May 2013
Beautiful Rachel! Well done x
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Mary Kate Molloy 28 May 2012
I admire this piece. So clear and beautiful.
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Sylva Portoian 27 May 2012
I loved first stanza The meaning is there Shot and clear Very sincere...! It is true... love comes once... You should keep it close... Not to lose...!
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I am lost of words to describe the honor I have for this wonderful short write, full of so much warmth and love, very profound and fantastice, nice! The_African_Son
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Jasbir Chatterjee 25 May 2012
very touching...sometimes the best thing to do is to leave that person alone...if they care, they will return; if they don't, the most practical thing to do is move on...
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