Aabid Masroor

Veteran Poet - 1,677 Points (21/06/1992 / Kashmir)

Alone - Poem by Aabid Masroor

Island-in an ocean of tears
I am single, alone and my fears
Which to repair is huge painted wall
With natures gift sunlight in snowfall

Then what could death do when i depart
And when there is empty chamber of heart
Hath no fear to loose, no one to recall
Hath no pains to choose, no deserving to fall

Ask the whispering waves of breeze
Am i alone in cold days of freeze
They say I am idol of solidity
When i have kissed the forehead of difficulity

Syed Aabid Syed

Topic(s) of this poem: alone

Comments about Alone by Aabid Masroor

  • Hassan Hayati (8/21/2017 1:21:00 AM)

    very beautifully the fall of words, I really like this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (4/16/2017 5:45:00 AM)

    Aabid, beautiful poem from you again..you have mastery hand to craft thoughts in artistic form...As if the empty land sound so packed with colours, because the words you said make things more bigger than we can see sometimes, like this poem. To be alone however its not weakening, it strengthen if we know..if we know... (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman (4/11/2017 9:15:00 PM)

    I had to come back for a second read and to put this stunning poem in my favorites...thank you so much Aabid...100+ (Report) Reply

  • Norah Tunney (4/11/2017 5:36:00 PM)

    You capture the sense of loneliness in such a heartfelt manner Aabid.
    a poem to sit with and reflect upon.
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  • Clarence Prince (4/11/2017 3:27:00 PM)

    No fear to loose,
    no one to recall,
    no pain to choose That's a blessing!
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  • Simone Inez Harriman (4/11/2017 2:11:00 PM)

    Another masterpiece worthy of poem of the day as was your lovely poem 'Spring' (Poem of the day 3/20/2017) (Report) Reply

  • Christina Simmons (4/11/2017 12:12:00 PM)

    I found this poem rather daunting and haunting. Ringing in my ears long after I read it. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (4/11/2017 4:12:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Very true said in few lines, one is alone while facing all difficulties.

    Whispering waves sang song of solitude
    But when it stood as an symbol of solidity
    it means it has choose to accept forehead difficulties.

    Congrats on member poem of the day.
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  • Geoffrey Fafard (4/11/2017 3:04:00 AM)

    I read this and liked it. Then I read it a second time and liked it even more. You have captured and laid down in words a portrayal of true loneliness Aabid.. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (4/11/2017 2:25:00 AM)

    a poem of human feelings that we all experience sometime in our lives? .............perfectly penned. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (4/11/2017 1:25:00 AM)

    Loneliness of a noble soul is nicely articulated. Thanks.
    Then what could death do when i depart
    Hath no fear to loose, no one to recall
    (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/11/2017 1:08:00 AM)

    Whispering waves of breeze..... reminds me of the song ALONE popularized by HEART.... congrats on being selected..... (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (4/11/2017 1:00:00 AM)

    Wonderful. Beautifully expressed feelings of loneliness n pain. Heart-touching. Congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/11/2017 12:28:00 AM)

    Ocean of tears! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (4/11/2017 12:15:00 AM)

    Nicely done, Aabid. Congrats on poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Ayman Parray (2/29/2016 2:44:00 AM)

    A fine poem, Aabid. Some wonderful lines in your poem. Love the way you end it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (2/22/2016 8:51:00 AM)

    Wow! Wonderful poem filled with tender and heartfelt emotion. Could feel the loneliness oozing from between each line. Really profound and aimed at the heart. I have read several of your poems, enjoying them very much. Have added you to my poet list, and given you a 10 on each of them! Thank you you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (2/1/2016 4:21:00 AM)

    Verily, a lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (8/9/2015 4:16:00 AM)

    A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned in poetic diction with lovely rhyme scheme. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (7/30/2015 10:59:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem, Syed. Thanks for sharing
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    Aabid Masroor (8/4/2015 12:07:00 AM)

    thank you

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 30, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, July 31, 2015

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