Alone On The Streets Poem by David Wood

Alone On The Streets

Rating: 4.4


She carried the whole world slung on her back
Some threadbare clothes in a rotten old sack.

Heavy lines etched on her weary face,
For her lot in life she had lost the race.

She once had a home with a respectable mother,
Now hard life on the street, she knows of no other.

Her misfortune now plain for all people to see,
A good outcome all lost and never to be.

She spends all her days alone on the streets,
Not a friend in the world only beggars she meets.

How will it all end, does anyone care?
Will anyone help, will someone be there?

If it was your daughter what would you do?
For solutions to her life are all but too few.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soulful Heart 19 July 2013

so poignant n touching.....a good thought to spare out of this rushing world...

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Patricia Grantham 18 July 2013

This is an excellent write David. You described a situation of living in the street with good details. We are very fortunate to have roofs over our heads and family that cares for us. Some of them made a choice to live like that but the majority fell on misfortune or took a wrong turn. God still loves them also. A thought provoking write.

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Patti Masterman 14 July 2013

Interesting character painting here. In the old days, it seemed children dreamed of running away to join the circus..now they dream of having a home with (impossible dream!) two parents..

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Shivangi Narayan 03 July 2013

very sentimental poem......nice approach to help the needy....

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Pradip Dasgupta 15 June 2013

touching the heart.that is poetry for me

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 04 September 2015

Very real and pathetic composition! tfs! ! !

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Amitava Sur 21 October 2013

So sympathizing it was, just I'm touched. Lovely detailing. But sometimes I feel that there is no explanation to misfortune.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 26 September 2013

Nice poem. Is it a common scene in England, seeing children on the streets, going away from the parents?

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Mohabeer Beeharry 30 July 2013

A good poet is the one who could feel for others and put it in words. I love it. I invite you to read my poems sometimes. Thanks Mohabeer Beeharry

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Dave Walker 30 July 2013

A fantastic poem, sadly it's the world we live in. All the councils in England are too worried about rock concerts and bike races to be have time to worry about people who live in their town or city.

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