David Wood

Gold Star - 13,602 Points (07 April 1950 / London)

Alone On The Streets - Poem by David Wood

She carried the whole world slung on her back
Some threadbare clothes in a rotten old sack.

Heavy lines etched on her weary face,
For her lot in life she had lost the race.

She once had a home with a respectable mother,
Now hard life on the street, she knows of no other.

Her misfortune now plain for all people to see,
A good outcome all lost and never to be.

She spends all her days alone on the streets,
Not a friend in the world only beggars she meets.

How will it all end, does anyone care?
Will anyone help, will someone be there?

If it was your daughter what would you do?
For solutions to her life are all but too few.

Comments about Alone On The Streets by David Wood

  • G. Akanji Olaniyi (9/4/2015 2:40:00 PM)

    Very real and pathetic composition! tfs! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Amitava Sur (10/21/2013 10:01:00 PM)

    So sympathizing it was, just I'm touched. Lovely detailing.
    But sometimes I feel that there is no explanation to misfortune.
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  • (9/26/2013 11:15:00 PM)

    Nice poem. Is it a common scene in England, seeing children on the streets, going away from the parents? (Report) Reply

  • Mohabeer Beeharry (7/30/2013 10:44:00 AM)

    A good poet is the one who could feel for others and put it in words. I love it.

    I invite you to read my poems sometimes. Thanks

    Mohabeer Beeharry
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  • (7/30/2013 3:37:00 AM)

    A fantastic poem, sadly it's the world we live in. All the councils in
    England are too worried about rock concerts and bike races to be
    have time to worry about people who live in their town or city.
    (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (7/19/2013 3:11:00 AM)

    so poignant n touching.....a good thought to spare out of this rushing world... (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/18/2013 8:47:00 AM)

    This is an excellent write David. You described a situation of living
    in the street with good details. We are very fortunate to have roofs
    over our heads and family that cares for us. Some of them made a
    choice to live like that but the majority fell on misfortune or took a
    wrong turn. God still loves them also. A thought provoking write.
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  • (7/14/2013 4:02:00 PM)

    Interesting character painting here. In the old days, it seemed children dreamed of running away
    to join the circus..now they dream of having a home with (impossible dream!) two parents..
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  • (7/3/2013 10:41:00 AM)

    very sentimental poem......nice approach to help the needy.... (Report) Reply

  • (6/15/2013 3:45:00 PM)

    touching the heart.that is poetry for me (Report) Reply

  • (6/13/2013 9:51:00 AM)

    Amazing poetry, a sad thought, a good subject for a church. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (5/29/2013 10:03:00 AM)

    A sad well worded poem. We forget to be grateful for our family and what we have. (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2013 7:39:00 AM)

    How much of a life you packed in few couplets! Bows... (Report) Reply

  • Freewill Amon (5/18/2013 5:33:00 AM)

    Pathetic condition for a person. But I believe God is always interested in us and can change our situation if we invite him. This world is not a home. (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (5/14/2013 5:09:00 PM)

    Interesting poem. Read mine - We the Unencumbered -
    (Report) Reply

  • (5/8/2013 2:31:00 PM)

    I took your advice on reading this poem and I must say it was amazing. My poem I Dont Know Jack really has a resemblance to your poem. (Report) Reply

  • (4/17/2013 5:56:00 PM)

    Fantastic poem, good write my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/25/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    the rackless society and she is the boon nice poem DAVID (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, March 25, 2013

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