Always Be The Water Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Always Be The Water

Rating: 5.0


Always the water
Not the frog at pond
Always the water
Gently down the stream
Always the water
Not the scorched river
Always the water
Not caught fish at lake
Always the water
Keeping one at bay
Always the water
Tranquil Peggy's Cove
Always the water
The Great Godly See

Monday, July 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: human and animal,human being
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The title and idea for the poem came from a conversation with fellow poet Joe Gustin.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leeann Azzopardi 20 July 2020

a beautiful poem that comments on the state of peace. Bravo!

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 July 2020

Always the water........greatly written theme

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 July 2020

yes always the water not for fish, snake, frog......aquatic animals always the rain not for the ground, trees, leaves, mountains always the sunlight not for human of icy lands always the breeze not for the human good breathing always the fruits and natural foods not for the specific life nothing of this world is fixed for special someone this world God made for everyone openly

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 July 2020

Let's, enjoy the world and be grateful to the God and be sympathized to everyone and everything

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Unwritten Soul 03 August 2020

Everything just compliment each other so fine Event if waves crashing the sky Always be the water!

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Susan Williams 22 July 2020

Part Three. Then came - -> Always the water / Gently down the stream < - - and of course my mind, being what it is, went rowing merrily merrily down the stream. Now tell me true, Richard, were you playing mind games with your poor unsuspecting reader or was I just really off the tracks, rails, and all wet?

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Susan Williams 22 July 2020

Part Two. I wasn't sure about this - - > Always the water / Not the frog at pond < - - - I immediately started thinking about frogs croaking and even an old beer ad wherein the frogs were all croaking the name of a beer- - but I wasn't sure yet that you were pulling my leg.

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Susan Williams 22 July 2020

Part One. Richard! ! ! ! You know darn well that I would never make it past this couplet without busting out laughing- -Always the water / Keeping one at bay - - you know I'm a sucker for a good pun and this is a good pun... so good it almost got by me.

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Kostas Lagos 20 July 2020

10 out of 10 Richard!

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